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Icon in Waiting

Icon in Waiting

Painting Painting \ Figure | 03/04/05 @739 | bluepulse | Comments critiques (10) | Views views (1142)


Icon in Waiting
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Avatar Almost-Human

 03/04/05 @748

Really nice image, skin a bit like plastic with the highlights.
Otherwise well done.
 
Avatar reilanchan

 03/04/05 @758

Not bad, the body and face just appear a bit flat.
 
Avatar Inabottle

 03/04/05 @777

Seems over all very flat... but it is nice composition and everything great background
 
Avatar Cinnamon

 03/06/05 @107

really nice, there is so much potential for this to be a really great image. Some definition of the highlights and shadows is what this needs, at the moment it looks like you were not quite sure how to define the shapes and so left things a little fuzzy.
 
Avatar curlyhair

 03/06/05 @333

It feels like background and the girl painted by two differnt persons,cause the color work on bg and on the girl(especially on her clothes)is very different.I like the bg. more:)Her face is closer to bg's colorwork but I would have add more shading
8+
 
BMunchausen

 03/08/05 @082

I agree with what people are saying. The background and dress just feel half-finished and need much more development. the folds on the dress feel a little too stylized too. They'd be more convincing if they were more carefully observed.
The green vase is floating rather than sitting on that shelf and it reads flat because of the contrast between the edges of it and the dark background. I think your reflected light on this needs to be darker on the lefthand side.
The figure too - her neck and upper chest lack definition so they read really flat. Some indication of the pit of the neck and the clavicles would really help.
 
Avatar Xris

 04/21/05 @120

Beautiful set and execution Greg! I particularly like the totally atypical pose you would normally expect of a female in this 'classical' setting - good move.

I understand what the prior crits are saying about a certain 'flatness' in this, but I suspect from what I see, that it's a deliberate element in your particular style and I actually find it to be an attractive detail.

Just superb! +10
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 06/19/05 @907

Wow... this guys really like you !!! I think is cool when comments are constructive and tells you the "know how". I like the mood, the composition, the concept, colors and drawing !!!! Like Xris said..... you where not trying to makit look like a real picture. Well done!
 
Avatar SudnDeath

 10/06/05 @974

+7 nice work - her face seems flat to me though needs more curvature details
 
Avatar Slither-Astray

 03/17/06 @357

wow, I really like the face and the mountains in the back
Lovely, but her clothes seem to lack some shadow
 
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